Query Critique Day: Dreaming Up My Brother

♥ Time for some community feedback! ♥ Yahong Chi was the lucky second “winner” from March’s Query Day, and so her shiny, revised query is now ready for some group feedback! As always, be HELPFUL, be gentle, and leave your comments below. ~~~ Dear [agent]: Fourteen-year-old Georgia Castleforté knows the secrets dreams can yield. How […]