Simple Tricks to Unstick Your Plot: Where Is Everyone?
Last Friday, I talked about my first go-to method when I inevitably get stuck in a draft. I lay out my character’s emotional dominoes and see where they ought to fall (which is often not where I’ve made them fall)…
But that trick doesn’t always work. Sometimes it’s not an emotional/goal issue that’s halted my story. Sometimes it’s plot-related, and I really have no idea what external event should be happening next.
This problem tends to hit to me during the first 40-50K words of the novel (i.e., the first half). Why? Because up until the midpoint, the characters in a story tend to be reacting more than they are acting.
Note: I am NOT saying that your characters are passive but rather that they are still acquiring the necessary skills and information to fully face the antagonist. The antagonist is throwing stones at your protagonist, and your protagonist is really just trying to get out of each scrape alive enough to keep fighting and honing his/her skills. (Obviously, if you’re writing something less action-focused, there will be less fighting for one’s life and more fighting for one’s sanity and/or beliefs.)
Up until the midpoint, a lot of the events are dictated by the world in which the protagonists lives and by what the antagonist is doing.
For example (and I warn you, there might be a few spoilers about to follow!), in Something Strange and Deadly, much of where Eleanor goes and the events in which she finds herself are dictated by external forces. Her mother makes her go on a carriage ride with a suitor or attend operas, while the antagonist keeps popping up with an army of walking dead. Not until the midpoint (when Eleanor gets a critical piece of information and faces off with a creepy spirit) does she finally see how to shift the odds in her favor. After that, when the antagonist throws stones, Eleanor throws them right back. She’s on the offensive.
And once my characters are on the offensive, I can usually ride my domino effect smoothly to the end of the book…One event clearly causes the next.
But getting to that midpoint can sometimes be tricky for me. I usually have to slowly reveal information as my character uncovers it (and information can be so hard to reveal in a compelling manner), and I need to let my character’s grow–their flaws and emotional well-being needs to be constantly challenged as well. So coming up with events that both allow my protagonist to be active and still be learning/growing can be hard.
Which is why I rely on my next trick:
Where the heck is everyone?
I don’t mean my protagonist–I mean everyone else.
When I’m stuck and don’t know what event and/or setting should next arrive, I turn to my secondary characters and my antagonists. Where are they right now? Where have they been since the last time I saw them? And what were all their emotional/goal dominoes throughout the previous scenes?
Here’s an example that I wrote a few weeks ago. Simon is the love interest, and since one of my magical cookies in this story is the romance, I knew that I wanted to get Simon on the page with my protagonist…But for the life of me, I could not figure out how.
So I started from Simon’s very first scene in the book and mapped out exactly where he was during my heroine’s scenes.
And as I wrote out this stuff, I uncovered some REALLY cool and really unexpected things about Simon’s character–about his emotional growth and backstory. Once I reached the spot in which I was stuck, I could feel how Simon’s emotional dominoes would dictate what needed to come next for my protagonist.
It’s not just the love interest that I do this trick with, though. I’ve also mapped my antagonist’s whereabouts/shenanigans and emotional dominoes in order to see what might come next in the plot. I might learn that my antagonist has been gearing up this whole time, and is now ready for an attack–so my next scene for my protagonist would become a run-in with the bad guy.
Other times, I’ll move to other important secondary characters and see where they were and what they were doing. Almost always, I’ll eventually reach an “aha!” point and see exactly what event needs to come next.
And sometimes, I’ll find that my emotional dominoes for other characters aren’t falling properly–that, like I mentioned last week, I’ve gone astray at some earlier point in the manuscript. For example:
Wait, the love interest wouldn’t be willing to forgive my heroine so quickly! He’d probably still be furious and refuse to join her at the park in that last scene…which would mean her best friend would have gone with her instead–and oh! If her best friend is there, then I can introduce this important piece of information earlier which lets me use this next scene as a turning point…
You get the idea. 🙂
You tell me: Have you ever done something like this–looked at where your characters are behind the scenes? Or are you, perhaps wise, and do all this before/while drafting?
November 15, 2013 @ 5:02 pm
I think I need to make a special folder just for all the great advice posts of yours I want to save. 🙂
November 16, 2013 @ 12:53 am
I think this is possibly some of the best advice in terms of writing I’ve ever heard. Never has it crossed my mind to go behind the scenes with secondary characters but now you’ve mentioned it, that’s a freaking fantastic idea. Susan, you are like an angel I swear. I can’t even express how much your advice helps. I’m so excited to try this method out and I really think it’s going to help me get out of this little rut I’m falling in. You’re the best! <3
November 16, 2013 @ 8:06 am
Amazing advice… I sometimes write scenes from a side character’s pov if I’m stuck on a certain scene, but it makes perfect sense to map out where all the pivotal characters are throughout the story and what they are doing when they aren’t with the main character. I think this will help me, not just with continuity of the characters, but also to help flesh out and create real people of characters who would normally just be mirrors for my MC. Thank you so much for all the time you take to help out fledgling writers. 🙂
November 20, 2013 @ 7:18 am
Susan, you always give such amazing writing advice. I love how this helps me rethink some parts of my story, and how it gives me practical advice with which to move forward. As always, you are AWESOME! Thank you 😀
December 23, 2013 @ 3:46 pm
Excellent tip. This is how I add layers to my characters and direction to the plot. IT also comes when I go through each draft substituting tell for show – it amazes me how much fuller the story becomes when we are forced to delve into showing something happening, then a blatant ‘he did this.’
Have a super Christmas and lucky 2014
April 10, 2015 @ 9:34 am
I’ve done this many times, but today, I needed this; good post. You’re more than direct 🙂 Now I just need to hunker down and think a bit, write a few hundred words, and then shove the Cookie into my structure!
April 10, 2015 @ 1:44 pm
So glad it’s helpful!!! <3
April 13, 2015 @ 1:19 am